Monday, December 9, 2013

Final Paper #3


Lucas Hernandez
December, 9, 2013
Eng. 101
How Our American Education Must Change


Our school curriculum is composed of five major classes, Math, History, English, Art, and P.E., I have no doubt that these classes are an important part of our culture and are necessary components of schooling, but they are not a key component for an education.  Students go to school, are barraged with information, and go home to study and remember that information. The goal of our current educational system is to mould students into a pattern to fit the particular needs of our culture and society. Our educational leaders act as if this system is an industrial process, that it can be improved just by having better data. School should not be treated as an institution where knowledge is forced into young minds; school should be a place for personal, social, intellectual, and most of all personal improvement. Schools must begin focusing on the individual student instead on the entire institution. Our educational system must realize that teachers aren’t just messengers meant to relay information; teaching is a creative profession that mentors, stimulates, promotes and engages learning towards willing students and classrooms.

         Students are constantly skipping out on school, believing that social life, sports, or drugs are more important. American author, feminist, and social activist Gloria Jean Watkins, better known by her pen name 'bell hooks' author of Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom, states “Sadly, children’s passion for thinking often ends when they encounter a world that seeks to educate them for conformity and obedience only.” Our educational system focuses too much on the whole, forgetting that it’s the individual student that must be taught. Certain students respond very well to monotonous tasks and worksheets; cell style teaching, but a large majority of students need visuals, activity, and excitement to get them involved and academically drawn. bell hooks also states "Professors who work diligently  to teach often become discouraged when students resist. Yet when the student does learn it is a truly rewarding experience for both parties." Our school system must begin showing teacher's that it's alright to get involved with their students, to nurture them in a fresh educational environment and to teach them that one-on-one confrontation is a necessary component to successfully reaching a student.

          It's clear that each individual student learns different than another. There are all kinds of skill levels in every subject. For example, if you walk into an art classroom you'll see one student hardly able to draw a stick figure and you'll see another painting a masterpiece. You can also clearly see this in a Math; certain students will be stuck in Algebra 2 even though their skill level clearly surpasses this subject, when at the same time other students will be forced into Algebra 2 without the appropriate skill level to complete the class. Constantly you see similar outcomes of both students; one will feel unchallenged and will not take the class seriously, and the other will most likely be left behind and fail the class.  John Taylor Gatto, a school teacher for over thirty years, observed the behaviors of students from the motivated to the unmotivated. He is the author of Against School: How Public Education Cripples Our Schools, And Why, he stated “Boredom was everywhere in my world, and if you asked the kids, as I often did, why they felt so bored, they always gave the same answers: They said the work was stupid, that it made no sense, that they already knew it. They said they wanted to be doing something real, not just sitting around.” Constantly teachers push the same mandated work upon the students, whether they're ready for it or they're intellectually beyond it. Without realizing it the teachers are negatively impacting the students learning process and teaching them that their individuality isn't necessary, and that they must push it aside to replace it with meaningless information. 

         I believe that it is important for teachers to get close to students, to ask them meaning full questions, and to let them express themselves whether they're in drama class or taking calculus. Instead of focusing on cramming as much material into their brains as they can in a short amount of time teachers must focus on the material that really counts, take time to get to know their students, and make time for the students to socialize and get to know each other. bell hooks explained about her early encounters with teaching "I did not take time to ask the students to introduce themselves or to share a bit of information about where they were coming from and what their hopes and dreams might be. I noticed, though, that when I did make time for everyone to get acquainted, the classroom energy was more positive and more conductive to learning." The problem is that every teacher is given standards and quotas to fill in a certain amount of time, they're taught to fill these quotas with information for the students to digest and taught to make the students "regurgitate the information at the appropriate moments" as bell hooks so well put it, but the teachers aren't taught to save time to let the students relax and use the information they were given for their benefit and relate it to their own life so that it truly turns into something meaningful for them, instead of just some information necessary to pass the next test or pop quiz.

            Our educational system must accept that every student has different abilities, regarding age, gender, and disabilities. If our educational system decides to accommodate a large diversity of skill levels, focus on the individual student, and let the students express themselves not only will it benefit our graduation success rate but it will also encourage students to stay in school and cause them to appreciate an education as more than just a grade on a piece of paper, but as something that you keep with you for years to come. We must create a climate for schools and the teachers within the schools to flourish. Ken Robinson is an English author, speaker, and international advisor on education in the arts to government, he has supplied an amazing metaphor that I will conclude this paper with. “Not far from where I live is a place called death valley. Death Valley is the hottest, driest place in America. In the winter of 2004 it rained in Death Valley. Seven inches of rain fell over a very short period, and in the spring of 2005 there was a phenomenon... The whole floor of Death Valley was carpeted in flowers. What it proved is this: That Death Valley isn’t dead, it’s dormant. Right beneath the surface are these seeds of possibility waiting for the right conditions so come about. In organic systems, if conditions are right life is inevitable. You take an area, a school, a district, you change the conditions, give people a different sense of possibility, a different set of expectations, a broader range of opportunities, and schools that where once bereft spring to life.”

“The task of the modern educator is not to cut down jungles, but to irrigate deserts.” 
― C.S. Lewis

Words Cited
hooks, bell. “Critical Thinking”. Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom. 8. New York: Routledge Taylor and Francis Group. 2009. Print
 Gatto, John. “Against School: How public education cripples our kids, and why” Harper’s Magazine. September, 2003. Web. 
Robinson, Ken. "How to Escape Education's Death Valley" 
Ted Talks. 2013. Web. 

Thursday, December 5, 2013

Quotes/Works Cited Practice

     
     John Taylor Gatto describes the problem of boredom in schools in his article "Against School: How Public Education Cripples Our Kids and Why," saying "Boredom is the common condition of schoolteachers, and anyone who has spent time in a teachers' lounge can vouch for the low energy, the whining, the dispirited attitudes, to be found there."

      In bell hooks book Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom hooks implies that "Keeping an open mind is an essential requirement of critical thinking... [It is] far too easy to become attached to and protective of one's viewpoint, and to rule out others perspectives."

     Daniel T. Willingham, Psychologist at the University of Virginia, explains that critical thinking consists "of seeing both sides of an issue, being open to new evidence that disconfirms young ideas, reasoning dispassionately, demanding that claims be backed by evidence, deducing and inferring conclusions from available facts, solving problems, and so forth."

Works Cited:
hooks, bell. Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical WisdomFlorenceKY: Taylor & Francis, 2009. Print.
Gatto, John Taylor. "Against School: How Public Education Cripples Our Kids and Why." wesjones.com. Wes Jones Home Page, September 2003. Web. 3 December 2013.
Freire, Paolo. "The Banking Concept of Education." Pedagogy of the Oppressed. New York, NY: Herder and Herder, 1970. Print.

Rough Draft Final Paper #3





     Our school curriculum is composed of five major classes, Math, History, English, Art, and P.E., I have no doubt that these classes are an important part of our culture and are necessary components of schooling, but they are not necessary for an education.  Students go to school, are barraged with information, and go home to study and remember that information. The goal of the educational system is to mould students into a pattern to fit the particular needs of our culture and society. Our educational leaders act as if this system is an industrial process, that it can be improved just by having better data. I dont believe that school  is simply an institution where knowlege is forced into young minds, i believe that school is a place for personal, social, intilectial, and most of all individual improvment. Schools must begin focusing on the individual student instead on the entire institution. Graduation from high school should not be based upon grade or age, but by readiness, maturity, and the skill level of the a student. Our educational system must realize that teachers aren’t just messengers meant to relay information, teaching is a creative profession that mentors, stimulates, promotes and engages learning towards willing students and classrooms.


      Students are constantly skipping out on school, believing that social life, sports, or drugs are more important. American author, feminist, and social activist Gloria Jean Watkins, better known by her pen name 'bell hooks' author of Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom, states “Sadly, children’s passion for thinking often ends when they encounter a world that seeks to educate them for conformity and obedience only.” Our educational system focuses too much on the whole, forgetting that it’s the individual student that must be taught. Certain students respond very well to monotonous tasks and worksheets; cell style teaching, but a large majority of students need visuals, activity, and excitement to get them involved and academically drawn. bell hooks also states "Professors who work diligently  to teach often become discouraged when students resist. Yet when the student does learn it is a truly rewarding experience for both parties." Our school system must begin showing teacher's that it's alright to get involved with their students, to nurture them in a fresh educational environment and to teach them that one-on-one confrontation is a necessary component to successfully reaching a student.

     It's clear that each individual student learns different than another. There are all kinds of skill levels in every subject. For example, if you walk into an art classroom you'll see one student hardly able to draw a stick figure and you'll see another painting a masterpiece. You can also clearly see this in a Math; certain students will be stuck in Algebra 2 even though their skill level clearly surpasses this subject, when at the same time other students will be forced into Algebra 2 without the appropriate skill level to complete the class. Constantly you see similar outcomes of both students; one will feel unchallenged and will not take the class seriously, and the other will most likely be left behind and fail the class.  John Taylor Gatto, a school teacher for over thirty years, observed the behaviors of students from the motivated to the unmotivated. He is the author of Against School: How Public Education Cripples Our Schools, And Why, he stated “Boredom was everywhere in my world, and if you asked the kids, as I often did, why they felt so bored, they always gave the same answers: They said the work was stupid, that it made no sense, that they already knew it. They said they wanted to be doing something real, not just sitting around.” constantly teachers push the same mandated work upon the students, whether they're ready for it or they're intellectually beyond it. Without realizing it the teachers are negatively impacting the students learning process and teaching them that they're individuality isn't necessary, and that they must push it aside to replace it with meaningless information. 

I believe that it is important for teachers to get close to students, to ask them meaning full questions, and to let them express themselves whether they're in drama class or taking calculus. Instead of focusing on cramming as much material into their brains as they can in a short amount of time teachers must focus on the material that really counts, take time to get to know their students, and make time for the students to socialize and get to know each other. bell hooks explained about her early encounters with teaching "I did not take time to ask the students to introduce themselves or to share a bit of information about where they were coming from and what their hopes and dreams might be. I noticed, though, that when I did make time for everyone to get acquainted, the classroom energy was more positive and more conductive to learning." The problem is that every teacher is given standards and quotas to fill in a certain amount of time, they're taught to fill these quotas with information for the students to digest and taught to make the students "regurgitate the information at the appropriate moments" as bell hooks so well put it, but the teachers aren't taught to save time to let the students relax and use the information they where given for their benefit and relate it to their own life so that it truly turns into something meaningful for them, instead of just some information necessary to pass the next test or pop quiz.




Our educational system must accept that every student has different abilities, regarding age, gender, and disabilities. If our educational system decides to accommodate a large diversity of skill levels, focus on the individual student, and let the students express themselves not only will it benefit our graduation success rate but it will also encourage students to stay in school and cause them to appreciate an education as more than just a grade on a piece of paper, but as something that you keep with you for years to come. We must create a climate for schools and the teachers within the schools to flourish. Ken Robinson is an English author, speaker, and international advisor on education in the arts to government, he has supplied an amazing metaphor for what our educational system needs to make our schools prosper “Not far from where I live is a place called death valley, Death Valley is the hottest, driest place in America. In the winter of 2004 it rained in Death Valley. 7 inches of rain fell over a very short period, and in the spring of 2005 there was a phenomenon. The whole floor of Death Valley was carpeted in flowers, for awhile. What it proved is this: That Death Valley isn’t dead, it’s dormant. Right beneath the surface are these seeds of possibility waiting for the right conditions so come about. In organic systems, if conditions are right life is inevitable. You take an area, a school, a district, you change the conditions, give people a different sense of possibility, a different set of expectations, a broader range of opportunities, and schools that where once bereft spring to life.”

“I have never let my schooling interfere with my education.”
― Mark Twain

Words Cited
hooks, bell. “Critical Thinking”. Teaching Critical Thinking: Practical Wisdom. 8. New York: Routledge Taylor and Francis Group. 2009. Print
 Gatto, John. “Against School: How public education cripples our kids, and why” Harper’s                     Magazine. September, 2003. Web. 
Ken Robinson. "How to Escape Education's Death Valley" 
Ted Talks. 2013. Web. 



I believe high school is here to test students on their ability to work hard for something they want. I think it forces students to prove that they're willing to work hard for an academic education and that we're worthy for the work force.
I believe that the school environment lacks meaningful information a majority of the time. Constantly I notice that I'll study hard for a test, get and A or a B in the test, and no longer than a day later I forget everything that i studied so hard to remember.











































Tuesday, November 26, 2013

In Class Discussion/Blog Post

In Class Discussion/Blog Post

1) The most important is the article by Keith Gilliard about creative arts in schools. Creativity should be appreciated and not subdued. Everything around us is art and if it can't be appreciated then the point of school is gone.

2) The second most important change was in the article by bell hooks. This is a skill that won't be developed without practice and is necessary for after life at school and to function properly in school. This is a necessary skill that will be used in things like jobs interviews and problem solving in life.

3) The third most important was the article by Jerry Large about persevering through school and developing character. No matter how hard you struggle through school you can always get through it if you maintain a level of perseverance and effort. This is also a skill that will be effective later on in life. If the school doesn't teach this it will be hard for students to learn this especially if they don't have parents who will teach it to them.

4) The forth most important was the article by Barry Boyce. This was about remaining calm and learning how to focus. When you run into stressful times in school you can practice remaining calm and it will help get things done. This skill will benefit and build off of your perseverance.

5) The fifth most important article was the one by Deb Aronson. This article was about preventing censorship. It is important for schools to present students with all the facts.

Educate Educators on how to Properly Educate

Ranking 5 Articles

1.Du Bois: Gilyard argued that arts and humanities are equally important to math, science and social studies. I very much agree with this. People constantly say that arts are not as important as math or history simply because not asd many children or young adults are capable of artistic activities, which is not true. I believe students simply haven't been exposed to enough art or drama to develope skills in these activities. Everything we see is art and created by an artist in one way or another.
2.bell hooks: hooks describes critical thinking and the who, what , when , where, and how. He explains that at a very young age children are more prone to questioning and critically thinking about objects and circumstances and that as we age those critical thinking skills slowly diminish due to parents and "educators" frowning on them questioning the authority. I believed its very important for students and youth to develop critical thinking skills in order for our planet and society to develop and increase intellectually.
3.Jerry Large: Large explains that in order to be successful a student must gain character, and character is possible to be taught. I agree that you must have a strong personality and beliefs in order to become successful, but im not sure if you can teach a child to gain character, I'm almost positive you must teach that to yourself.
4.Barry Boyce: Boyce encourages parents to teach their children calming methods like yoga and nature walks to calm them in times of stress. I think this is very important, my an my grandpa used to meditate/pray after diner next to our fireplace every evening when i was very young and I'm sure this helped me gain the self control i have today.
5.Deb Aronson: I did not get this handout (will update when i do)

Thursday, November 21, 2013

Chalk comparison the Freire and Gatto

The movie Chalk was a "mockumentory" about high-school teachers a faculty. This movie really brought schoolteachers down to a human level. It expressed their troubles with dating, friendships, and kids.

I thought that this movie really emphasizes on  Freire's "The teacher chooses to enforce his choice and the students comply." There's a scene in the move were Mr. Stoope (the enthusiastic history teacher) wants to win the "Best Teacher of the Year Award". So he decides to make the students do things other than learn history to give him the upper hand in winning. I thought that this showed him enforcing something other than learning one the students and the students simply complied, without having another choice.

Mr. Stoope also has a humorous scene where a student in his class is using large words and making Mr. Stoope feel stupid “You use some big words I don’t understand. Use words I can understand". This is similar to Gatto's explanation of the public school system trying to make every individual into a monotonous being and to simply reduce them all to the same level.

There's a teacher named Mr. Lawry, in the film they show that he's a first year teacher and very inexperienced. His first day is awkward and monotonous, you can see that the students are clearly bored. This refers back to Gatto's explanation of boredom. “They said the work was stupid, that it made no sense, that they already knew it. They said they wanted to be doing something real, not just sitting around” This is obvious on the faces of the students in my Lawry's classroom, clear boredom because he's very inexperienced and never wanted to be a teacher in the first place.

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Notes for Chalk

Chalk:

Comes frome a long line of teachers, explaines that is it wasnt for his teachers in high school he wouldent be what he is today

-50% of teachers quit withing the first 3 years of teaching
-Coach Web P.E. Teacher
-History teacher really monotonous and boring
"you can kiss my white ass"
-Been teaching an hour and 10 mins - Mr. Lawry
Mrs. Reddell - AP
Mr. Stoope History / Enthusiastic Goals: Sarcasm, Against it. Cleanlyness, organization, lesson plan... Teacher being taught...
Fight breaks our, AP gets involved breaks it up
P.E. Thinks everyone thins she's gay
Mr. Lawry cant control his class
AP Getting home late, affecting her relationship with her husband
Mr Lawry  compliments the P.E. teacher on her yoga, also gets his yogurt stolen
-Student was hardly late, gets yelled at by P.E. teacher
teachers seem to be against each other
P.E. teacher wants to get teachers exercising, morning walks
Mr. Lawry gets his chalk stolen, walks out
Mr. Lawry gets a book on classroom management
Mr. Stoope feels intimidated by students because they're smarter than him
Mr Lawry using humor in his teaching
Janitor drops piano
Mr Stoop lectures teachers on borrowing/ stealing
P.E. Teacher thinks other people think she's pushy
Mr. Stoope fake calls students home to teach him a lesson
Mr. Lawry teacher has weird dream about Mrs. Web
Ap asks Mr. Lawry if he's seeing anyone
Kids phone goes off in class, Mr Lawry sends him out
Teachers go out and drink together, gossip about troublesome students
Mr. Stoop is picked for runner up as teacher of the year
Mr. Lawry goes to a trouble students house and speaks to her parents, she gives him lessons on becoming a teacher
Mrs. Web tries to tell Ap how to do her job
Mr. Stoop goes all out at the teacher of the year debate, didnt win in the long run, hes pissed
Mrs Web is abrasive
AP is sick of being AP, wants to back to teaching teachers to a spelling bee of slang, he wins
Mr. Lawry asked if he wants to continue teaching, he's not sure











Gatto vs. Freire Similarities

Both Freire and Gatto have similar views on what is the proper way to school a student, and what the unproper ways are. Obviously they both disagree on the ways our schools go about teaching, they show that instead of teaching our students to become true individuals we transform them into monotonous dictionary's full of knowledge but with no clue what the knowledge really means.
 "Education must begin with the solution of the teacher-student contradiction, by reconciling the poles of the contradiction so that both are simultaneously teacher and students." - Freire. He describes that in order to teach you must be willing to be taught, instead of domination over the student as if your the only one who knows anything in the classroom.
"We could encourage the best qualities of youthfulness - curiosity, adventure, resilience, the capacity for surprising insight - simply by being more flexible about time, texts, and tests, by introducing kids to truly competent adults, and by giving each student what autonomy he or she needs in order to take a risk every now and then." -Gatto. Gatto shows that in order to educate a person you dont need to force a test or an assignment on them and have a required date for it to be completed, you simply need to show them that they are capable of completing.it and doing a good job.
I believe that Gatto and a Freire had similar beliefs about our educational system, the way things must be changed, and how we must teach our students to be individuals instead of  plain, black and white human beings. 
I guarantee Gatto and Freire would have a long, understanding debate on our educational system today if they met each other! 

Thursday, November 14, 2013

My Experience in High School Compared to Gatto's Essay

My high school experience was similar to Gatto's explanation of high school, but in a way i feel like it was more my fault then the teachers and faculty's fault. Gatto described high school as very negative and unsatisfying, I felt this way about high school but i didn't feel as if it was meant to be that way. I was very unmotivated in high school until my senior year simply because i was stuck in a rut and never tried to get out until the end of my last year.  I was fortunate enough to have a strong group of teachers that really motivated their students to excel and be the best that they could be, of course there where a few teachers that i heard rumors about who apparently didnt give a hoot about their students and simply stacked packets apon packets on them, but i was lucky enough to never register into their classes.
     Gatto described three points that he said where what our school is supposed to do but never successfully accomplishes; 
1) To make good people.
2) To make good citizens.
3) To make each person his or her personal best.

     I honestly believe that the majority of my teachers had those three points in their mind and did their bbest to successfully apply these to their students. 
    It's kinda funny thought there was actually a teacher that my older brother had in high school who was laid of for being to involved with his students. He was like 80 years old and absolutely loved teaching, but apparently he got a little to involved with his students and would have group discussions in his own home! eventually the school board found out and fired him haha, i think it was just an excuse to fire him cuz he was so ols thought.

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

What we believe the purpose of K-12 education should be Compared to what it is

What we believe the purpose of K-12 education should be:

1) To help children prosper and grow
2)To make each person his/her personal best

Why?:   Because this will help our species prosper and advance in a healthy way 


5 quotes from the text supporting that what we claim is the purpose of education and what the "true purpose" is, are two very different things:
          1. "The reason given for this enormous upheaval of family life and cultural traditions was, roughly speaking, threefold:
1) To make good people.
2) To make good citizens.
3) To make each person his or her personal best."

          2. "These goals are still trotted out today on a regular basis, and most of us accept them in one form or another as a decent definition of public education's mission, however short schools actually fall in achieving them."
         3. "The aim.. . is simply to reduce as many individuals as possible to the same safe level, to breed and train a standardized citizenry, to put down dissent and originality. That is its aim in the United States . . . and that is its aim everywhere else. " 
         4. "an educational system deliberately designed to produce mediocre intellects, to hamstring the inner life, to deny students appreciable leadership skills, and to ensure docile and incomplete citizens - all in order to render the populace "manageable.""
         5. "We don't need Karl Marx's conception of a grand warfare between the classes to see that it is in the interest of complex management, economic or political, to dumb people down, to demoralize them, to divide them from one another, and to discard them if they don't conform. "

Monday, November 11, 2013

Final Paper #2

    

Throughout my life I have had many teachers, some good some bad and a few hardly even memorable. Honestly, the hardly memorable outweigh the good and the bad. It takes a certain type of teacher to successfully reach their students and keep the lessons they taught them implemented in their memories for years to come. I believe it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students to be a great educator. Out of the many teachers I have had throughout my lifetime, I've chosen two particular teachers to write about, one fantastic teacher who has all the qualities of a good teacher I believe a student needs, and one very poor teacher who lacks the drive to connect with his students emotionally and educationally.



I'm first going to focus on Mr. Miranda, my old 8th grade social studies teacher. Mr. Miranda is a large, overweight man who had a big grey beard, slicked back hair, and always had a new eye catching Hawaiian shirt on. Mr. Miranda was very self-involved; he constantly set the students standards up to his standards. Using phrases like “if I can do it you can do it” without realizing that everyone has different skill levels large or small. He constantly bragged about his accomplishments and how he was able to pass any test in college without study or review, not realizing that he was setting a bad example for his 14 year old students. He also loved talking about himself, he was in love with his own image and if you disagreed with him you were always wrong; he’d dismiss you without considering your opinion first.



I can remember first stepping into his classroom; I was 14 years old and an adolescent youth who didn't give a hoot about school or academics. I can remember walking into Mr. Miranda's classroom with a swagger walk that said "I couldn't care less". Me and Miranda made eye contact and I could tell by his raised eyebrow and scowl that he wasn't looking forward to our time being spent together. I plumped my bottom on the seat closest to the back and made my posture as lousy as possible. As soon as class started, Mr. Miranda, with his scowled face and bright Hawaiian shirt that clearly didn't compliment each other, slowly raised his body out from his cramped seat and wrote his name slowly and carelessly on the whiteboard. As he did this, i took a look around the classroom, it looked ordinary enough, but there was a strange smell in the air. It smelt as if he left the trash out too long and something began to fester and rot inside. Soon after i noticed the smell i saw a few plastic zip lock bags pinned to the wall furthest from me and closest to Mr. Miranda. I raised my hand, interrupting his introduction speak about his many accomplishments and degrees. He hesitantly called on me,



 "whats in those plastic bags?" I asked,



 "It's a science project," he explained



"I'm curious of how long it takes for a school cafeteria pizza to rot"



"oh..." I  said with a puzzled look on my face



"But why are you doing science in a social study class?" I questioned, innocently.



"Now turn your books to page..." He ignored my question...



Mr. Miranda was a character for sure and a very bright man, but he was not teaching material. I eventually flunked his class, but that's not why I dislike him; It was his lousy teaching methods. The thing that bothered me the most was that he favored students. He had a few students that he would constantly call upon, whether my hand was up or not. He doubted that I or any of his less favored students had anything intelligent to say. Eventually I stopped raising my had, seeing as there was no point. As an 8th grader, only 14 years old, I required some sort of praise or satisfaction to continue trying in class and Mr. Miranda gave me neither. It wasn't long that I stopped doing homework, started sleeping in class, and eventually stopped showing up all together.



Mr. Miranda wasn’t fit to teach 8th graders, I believe that at age 14 students need teachers willing to listen and set an example. At this age students need the building blocks to prepare them for high school, they need teachers willing to go the extra mile to create a learning environment for every student, but Mr. Miranda had no drive to improve his teaching methods, he was in love with himself not the students.  I believe he lacked the drive to touch every student in a specific way and create a lasting learning experience for everyone.



              Now Mr. Frease is my favorite teacher of all time, and I'm glad that I had him my senior year of high school as a Life Long Wellness teacher.  Life Long Wellness is the perfect class for him to teach, it's a class similar to health but without all of the details of the human body In this class Mr. Frease described the difficulties in coming of age and how to deal with family, drug, and depression related stress'. Mr. Frease is around 60-65 years old, about 5'10'' and always had a smile on his face. He treated every student with respect and wasn't too hard on grading as long as he believed you were learning from the subject. We had a few paper assignments in that class, and in order for me to write about a subject I have to be emotionally involved (that's why I don't do to well on research papers), every written assignment he handed out I put my heart and soul into and I could tell he read every one thoroughly, making marks and comments where he thought necessary.



There are a few moments that really stand out in my mind about Mr. Frease, but one in particular stands above the others. A friend of mine, who I will not name, spent most of his senior year in and out of depression. His previous host family abandoned him and we adopted him into our family which was very hard for him. We spent hours talking about his life, I would try to bring him up and remind him about the positive things and would try to get him to forget the negative. But, eventually I began to get annoyed with him constantly being depressed about nearly every negative thing that came into his life, and I started being frank with him telling him to "lighten up and grow some thicker skin. I knew this wasn't helping, but I thought I had betting things going on in my life besides my brother. Eventually, after a long period of not speaking with him he came to me and told me that the thought of suicide had popped into his head. I spoke to him for a couple of hours and gave him my usual talk, but I knew this wouldn't work and that I needed to seek help. I told my friend to speak with Mr. Frease and to tell him all the things he had spilled out to me. I have a clear picture of Mr. Frease and my friend talking, it was after school and Mr. Frease had taken him on a walk, they paused on a hill and sat for a long while. The two of them spoke on that hill for more than two hours, and when they finished, I saw them laugh, hug and shake hands with a smile on both of their faces. They parted ways and my friend came to me with a look of satisfaction and said to me "Mr. Frease is right, life is always good." My bud has been happy-go-lucky ever since.



This experience showed me Mr. Frease's dedication to students, and his willingness to go out of his way just to make a lasting difference in someone’s life whether it means telling them they did well on their assignment, or saving a life. In order to be a successful teacher it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students and Mr. Frease had all of these qualities.

Thursday, November 7, 2013

Is there a clear thesis at the end of the intro paragraph?

What does the thesis statement indicate the paper will compare/contrast?

What are the traits or characteristics that each teacher has?

What are the examples that the writer uses to "abundantly illustrate" that each teacher had each characteristic the thesis statement refers to?

Does the paper analyze (thoroughly explain) the two teachers' styles, traits, characteristics, etc. that the thesis statement indicates it will cover?

Is the paper between 1,200 and 1,500 words?

Does the writer clearly indicate where any quotes or other outside information came from? (It must at least use signal phrases, such as According to Audre Lord, etc.)

Tuesday, November 5, 2013

Paragraph Practice

When i was 14 and an adolescent youth I was in 8th grade and didn't give a hoot about school or academics. I can remember walking into Mr. Miranda's classroom with a swagged walk that said "I couldn't care less". Me and Miranda made eye contact and i could tell by his raised eyebrow and scowl that he wasn't looking forward to our time being spent together. I plumped my bottom on the seat closest to the back and made my posture as lousy as possible. As soon as class started, Mr. Miranda, with his scowled face and bright Hawaiian shirt that clearly didn't compliment each other, slowly raised his body out from his cramped seat and wrote his name slowly and carelessly on the whiteboard. As he did this, i took a look around the classroom, it looked ordinary enough but there was a strange smell in the air. It smelt as if he left the trash out too long and something began to fester and rot inside. Soon after i noticed the smell i saw a few plastic zip lock bags pinned to the wall furthest from me and closest to Mr. Miranda. I raised my hand, interrupting his introduction speak about his many accomplishments and degrees. He hesitantly called on me,
 "whats in those plastic bags?" i asked,
 "It's a science project," he explained
"I'm curious of how long it takes for a school cafeteria pizza to rot"
"oh..." i said with a puzzled look on my face
"But why are you doing science in a social study class?" I questioned, innocently.
"Now turn your books to page..." He ignored my question...



Mr. Miranda was very self-involved; he constantly set the students standards up to his standards. Using phrases like “if I can do it you can do it” without realizing that everyone has different skill levels large or small. He constantly bragged about his accomplishments and how he was able to pass any test in college without study or review, not realizing that he was setting a bad example for his 14 year old students. He also loved talking about himself, he was in love with his own image and if you disagreed with him you were always wrong; he’d dismiss you without considering your opinion first.

Rough Draft Paper #2

    

Throughout my life I have had many teachers, some good some bad and a few hardly even memorable. Honestly, the hardly memorable outweigh the good and the bad. It takes a certain type of teacher to successfully reach their students and keep the lessons they taught them implemented in their memories for years to come. I believe it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students to be a great educator. Out of the many teachers I have had throughout my lifetime, I've chosen two particular teachers to write about, one fantastic teacher who has all the qualities of a good teacher I believe a student needs, and one very poor teacher who lacks the drive to connect with his students emotionally and educationally.



I'm first going to focus on Mr. Miranda, my old 8th grade social studies teacher. Mr. Miranda is a large, overweight man who had a big grey beard, slicked back hair, and always had a new eye catching Hawaiian shirt on. Mr. Miranda was very self-involved; he constantly set the students standards up to his standards. Using phrases like “if I can do it you can do it” without realizing that everyone has different skill levels large or small. He constantly bragged about his accomplishments and how he was able to pass any test in college without study or review, not realizing that he was setting a bad example for his 14 year old students. He also loved talking about himself, he was in love with his own image and if you disagreed with him you were always wrong; he’d dismiss you without considering your opinion first.



I can remember first stepping into his classroom; I was 14 years old and an adolescent youth who didn't give a hoot about school or academics. I can remember walking into Mr. Miranda's classroom with a swagger walk that said "I couldn't care less". Me and Miranda made eye contact and I could tell by his raised eyebrow and scowl that he wasn't looking forward to our time being spent together. I plumped my bottom on the seat closest to the back and made my posture as lousy as possible. As soon as class started, Mr. Miranda, with his scowled face and bright Hawaiian shirt that clearly didn't compliment each other, slowly raised his body out from his cramped seat and wrote his name slowly and carelessly on the whiteboard. As he did this, i took a look around the classroom, it looked ordinary enough, but there was a strange smell in the air. It smelt as if he left the trash out too long and something began to fester and rot inside. Soon after i noticed the smell i saw a few plastic zip lock bags pinned to the wall furthest from me and closest to Mr. Miranda. I raised my hand, interrupting his introduction speak about his many accomplishments and degrees. He hesitantly called on me,



 "whats in those plastic bags?" i asked,



 "It's a science project," he explained



"I'm curious of how long it takes for a school cafeteria pizza to rot"



"oh..." i said with a puzzled look on my face



"But why are you doing science in a social study class?" I questioned, innocently.



"Now turn your books to page..." He ignored my question...



Mr. Miranda was a character for sure and a very bright man, but he was not teaching material. I eventually flunked his class, but that's not why I dislike him; It was his lousy teaching methods. The thing that bothered me the most was that he favored students. He had a few students that he would constantly call upon, whether my hand was up or not. He doubted that I or any of his less favored students had anything intelligent to say. Eventually I stopped raising my had, seeing as there was no point. As an 8th grader, only 14 years old, I required some sort of praise or satisfaction to continue trying in class and Mr. Miranda gave me neither. It wasn't long that I stopped doing homework, started sleeping in class, and eventually stopped showing up all together.



Mr. Miranda wasn’t fit to teach 8th graders, I believe that at age 14 students need teachers willing to listen and set an example. At this age students need the building blocks to prepare them for high school, they need teachers willing to go the extra mile to create a learning environment for every student, but Mr. Miranda had no drive to improve his teaching methods, he was in love with himself not the students.  I believe he lacked the drive to touch every student in a specific way and create a lasting learning experience for everyone.



Now Mr. Frease is my favorite teacher of all time, and I'm glad that I had him my senior year of high school as a Life Long Wellness teacher.  Life Long Wellness is the perfect class for him to teach, it's a class similar to health but without all of the details of the human body In this class Mr. Frease described the difficulties in coming of age and how to deal with family, drug, and depression related stress'. Mr. Frease is around 60-65 years old, about 5'10'' and always had a smile on his face. He treated every student with respect and wasn't too hard on grading as long as he believed you were learning from the subject. We had a few paper assignments in that class, and in order for me to write about a subject I have to be emotionally involved (that's why I don't do to well on research papers), every written assignment he handed out I put my heart and soul into and I could tell he read every one thoroughly, making marks and comments where he thought necessary.



There are a few moments that really stand out in my mind about Mr. Frease, but one in particular stands above the others. A friend of mine, who I will not name, spent most of his senior year in and out of depression. His previous host family abandoned him and we adopted him into our family which was very hard for him. We spent hours talking about his life, I would try to bring him up and remind him about the positive things and would try to get him to forget the negative. But, eventually I began to get annoyed with him constantly being depressed about nearly every negative thing that came into his life, and I started being frank with him telling him to "lighten up and grow some thicker skin. I knew this wasn't helping, but I thought I had betting things going on in my life besides my brother. Eventually, after a long period of not speaking with him he came to me and told me that the thought of suicide had popped into his head. I spoke to him for a couple of hours and gave him my usual talk, but I knew this wouldn't work and that i needed to seek help. I told my friend to speak with Mr. Frease and to tell him all the things he had spilled out to me. I have a clear picture of Mr. Frease and my friend talking, it was after school and Mr. Frease had taken him on a walk, they paused on a hill and sat for a long while. The two of them spoke on that hill for more than two hours, and when they finished, I saw them laugh, hug and shake hands with a smile on both of their faces. They parted ways and my friend came to me with a look of satisfaction and said to me "Mr. Frease is right, life is always good. I'm hungry lets go home." My bud has been happy-go-lucky ever since.



This experience showed me Mr. Frease's dedication to students, and his willingness to go out of his way just to make a lasting difference in someone’s life whether it means telling them they did well on their assignment, or saving a life. In order to be a successful teacher it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students and Mr. Frease had all of these qualities. 

Monday, November 4, 2013

2nd Paper Thesis and 1st Paragraph

A teacher must touch each individual student in a significant way in order to made a lasting different in their students life

An educator must enjoy teaching in order to be a great teacher

I believe it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students to be a great educator.  

    Throughout my life I have had many teachers, some good some bad and a few hardly even memorable. Honestly, the hardly memorable outweigh the good and the bad. It takes a certain type of teacher to successfully reach their students and keep the lessons they taught them implemented in their memories for years to come. I believe it takes commitment, love for teaching, and a dedication to your students to be a great educator. Out of the many teachers I have had throughout my lifetime, I've chosen two particular teachers to wright about, one fantastic teacher who has all the qualities of a good teacher I believe a student needs, and one very poor teacher who lacks the drive to connect with his students emotionally and educationally.

Summary of my Two Teachers

I've had many good and bad teachers and even some "OK" ones, but I've narrowed my decision down to two teachers. One fantastic senior lifelong teacher and one lousy, sarcastic, 8th grade social studies teacher.
Mr. Frease was my senior lifelong teacher. I loved Mr. Frease because he cared deeply for his students and knew how to reach them individually. He taught lifelong, P.E., and weight training. I was lucky enough to have him in two of his three classes and in each class i noticed that he took great care of his students and made sure each one of them succeed in what he was trying to reach them with.
Mr. Miranda was my 8th grade Social Studies teacher, and I hated him. He was arrogant, sarcastic, hated kids (especially 8th graders), was a horrible grader, and had rotten food hung up in plastic bags all around his classroom.
That's a summary of both of the teachers ill be writing about, ill elaborate more in the paper.

Comparing Schools

 Mr .Escalante and Mr. Keating's schools are clearly very different. From their setting to the students that attend the school. I believe that Mr. Keating's school took place in New England though they don't specify, and Mr. Escalante's school took place in a very Hispanic neighborhood somewhere in San Francisco.
   The students in Mr. Escalante's class and school clearly came from in wealthy families and where never pushed to excel in school and go to college, when obviously Mr. Keating's school and students where very pressured by their families to ace their school activities and eventually be accepted into very advanced colleges and attain doctorates.
The faculty in both schools where also very different, at Mr. Escalante's school the educators had no faith low expectations for the students and never pushed them to attend college or even graduate. The teachers had poor disciplinary skills and only taught the students the basics of each course. One the complete opposite side in Mr. Keating's school all the teachers had very high expectations for the students and assumed each and every one of them would not only ace their courses but also graduate into Harvard or some other prestigious school and gain masters or doctorates. Their disciplinary actions where also very strict and controlled the students well.

Thursday, October 31, 2013

Dead Poets Society Part Two Notes


Dead Poets Society Part Two Notes

-Knox enters the party he was invited to/ he doesnt know anyone/ doesn't seem to enjoy himself
-Newanda talks to the girls in poems, they love it
-Knox sits next to the girl of his dreams whos passed out on the couch, he leans in and kisses her forhead and he boyfriend kicks his ass
-"Newanda" publishes a poem in the school paper demanding girls be admitted to the school
-"newanda pulls a prank at the assembly, gets paddled,stays loyal to the club
-School principle lectures Mr. Keating on his teaching methods
-Mr. Keating tells Newanda that it was a dumb stunt he pulled
-Neil's dad tells him to quit the play
-Mr. Keating tells Neil to speak with his father and show him his passion for acting
-Knox whent to the girls school and read her his poem, she was embarrassed
-Chris (knox's love) visits the school and tells him to stop
-She agrees to go to the play with him
-Neils dad showes up at the play /Neil does great!
-Apparently Neils dad didn't approve of the play
-Neils dad decides to pull him out of school and enroll him in military school
-Neil commits suicide
-Tod breaks down
-School board interrogates students, Newanda  punches ---- in the face for rating
-Principal teaches class, Keating comes in for personals, students stand on desks "oh captain my captain"






Tuesday, October 29, 2013

Mr. Escalante compared to Mr. Keating

Mr. Escalante's teaching where very student oriented, he made the classroom fun and interactive. Mr. Keating taught in a similar manner, he made the students look "outside of the box" and taught them to believe in themselves and to express themselves as an individual. Both of these teacher clearly car for their students, Mr. Keating pushed his students to write their own poetry, even if they didn't feel comfortable with speaking publicly.
   But, both of these teachers are also very different because they teach in completely different environments. Mr. Escalant taught students who didn't believe they could ever excel in an academic environment, Mr. Escalante pushed his students from algebra to calculus. Mr. Keating took a different approach, because the students where so used to being pushed around by their teachers and parents to excel academically, he decided to bring things down to a human level and teach them about themselves. Instead of pushing the students i think he was trying to pull them back and let them reflect on themselves, instead of teaching them to excel academically he was teaching them how to excel in life.

Mr. McFarland Compared to Mr. Escalante

    I believe that Mr. Escalante was similar to Mr. McFarland because they both are very dedicated to their students. I could tell that Mr. McFarland cared for his students, he encouraged Mike to become a writer because he could tall he was very passionate about his writings and he helped develop hi writing skills. Just like Mr. Escalante he had a goal to improve his students and make them learn in a fun and academic way. Although they both taught in different environments and subjects they where both very into their teachings and students. Mr, Escalante was involved with his students both inside the classrooms and outside, before their final exam he brought them home with him and made them supper while he helped them study. Similarly Mr. McFarland would bring Mike and other students to his place so that they could study writings and books to improve their literatur knowledge.

Part two on "Stand and Deliver Summary"

Part 2 of "stand and Deliver" was pretty interesting. Mr. Escalante really pushed the students during this half to the point of harming himself. He had a minor heart attack and was out of school for a few days, but quickly came back and began teaching the students even though he was advised not to. Eventually the students took the test and every single one of them passed. Because of this the students where doubted by the school board that they took the test honestly. They assumed the students cheated and didnt allow them to pass, they began a full investigation the the students. while this investigation was happening the students began to act out and fall into a small depression. Mr. Escalante was furious and confronted the investigators and spoke his opinion.   Eventually the students re-took the test(it was harder the second time) and every one of the students passes with above a 3.

Dead Poets Society Notes

Dead Poets Society


-opening ceremony
'candle of knowledge'
-meeting roommate "tod" the new guy
-father makes Neil drop the newspaper
-All guy school
-Very strict teachers, besides English teacher
-English teacher gives a lesson on Carpe Dium - "seize the day"
-Neil met the girl of his dreams, shes with a football player
-English teacher told students to rip out introduction of english book because it was telling them how to think.
-English teacher was previously head of the dead poet society
-Sudents are going to re-create the dead poet society
-"five centuries of verse" Sudents had a blast at their first dead poets meeting
-English teacher makes Shakespeare fun, teaches students to look at the world differently
-Neil wants to act in 'midsummer night dream'
-Neils friend saw the girl neil likes
-Neil got the part!
-English teacher makes students read their poems, one speak s of love
-Forces walt to "yelp" and create his own poetry infront of the class
----- calls the girl of his dream, he's invited to a party
---- brings girls into the club

Theres many ways these two teachers differ, Mr. Escalante and Mr. Keating both teach in very differnet environments.





Thursday, October 24, 2013

Stand an Deliver notes part 2

Stand an Deliver notes part 2:

-Accidentally insulted chick(claudia)  , shes stressing out about her home life. "so whats the problem"
-grandma sick, cant pay for her medical bill
-he thinks he's the dumbest in the class "i cant do calculous"
-comes in late because of grandma, throws chair because teacher kicks him out
-wife is disappointed that he spends all his time teaching
-hair net bring abuela to teachers house for christmas
"blind man in a dark room looking for a black cat that isnt there"
-teaching english, suddently feals sick and walks out the room. callapses on the ground
-kids in the room trying to teach them selves
-fight breaks out
-new substitute, not a calculous teacher, music teacher
-teacher came back to teach early
-students took test
-students celebrated by going swimming
-18/18 passed, presented a plach to their tearcher
-education board doubt that the students took the test honestly
-students all begin acting out
-angel taunts a cop
-education board interigating students
-angel jokes
-stole teacher car and fixed it up
"cant be apart of a system they're finally qualified for"
-Mr. Escalante lays into the school board
"you are the true dreamers, and dreams accomplish anything"
-students retake test
-All students pass second attem

Tuesday, October 22, 2013

"What makes a good teacher?" Stand And Deliver (Group Notes)

"What makes a good teacher?" Stand And Deliver (Group Notes)

·  "What makes a good teacher?" Stand And Deliver (Group Notes)

      Connected with every student
·         Encouraged students to look at the bigger picture, made it less over whelming to learn. – Went to restaurant and talked to Ana’s father about her possibly being able to go to college one day
·         Paid attention to each student, treated them how they needed to be treated.
·         Caught attention by dressing up
·         Not intimidated by students
·         Had a good attitude, wanted to teach
·         Turned real life situations into lessons
·         Truly believes that student can learn. Didn’t let other teachers stop him from teaching. “Our kids can’t handle calculus, we don’t even have the books”
·         Embarrassed student into doing work, completing assignments
·         Took extra time to teach kids, wanted them to get ahead
·         “Angel” expressed he wanted to “get straight” after leaving class.
·         Mr. Escalante says “All you see is the turn, not the road ahead” to the student who though working was more important than school. “Wouldn’t you rather be designing these cars?”
·         Claudia says to her mother “I’m doing this so I don’t have to depend on some young guy for the rest of my life.”
·         Mr. Escalante said “I want to teach” when asked by neighbor why he quit his job
·         Pressured Angel into answering question, did not give up on him
·         Shows students home life. Kids/taking care of parents/poverty. “Turn off light” while girl is studying